Exposure shared task: Sam, Madi, and Jacob

Personification: “merciless iced east winds that knife us”- The wind is so brutal it is as though it is another opposing soldier stabbing them with a bayonet. The harsh weather environments are another evil enemy to them. The cold could potentially be the real killer as the men wait the call from their leaders.

Listing: “war lasts, rain soaks, and clouds sag stormy”- Listing can often draw a mood out of the text. It could be an uncomfortable feeling or in this case a slow sad mood. The listing here represents dullness, sadness and pain. The men will all feel so alone out in the exposed open, looking into the storm the war seems to be forever ongoing and the harsh bomb struck environment is never ending.   

Simile:

  • “Like twitching agonies of men among its brambles”
  • “Like a dull rumour of some other war”

“Like twitching agonies of men among its brambles” – The anguish of the men is shown in the wind. The imagery that Owen creates is that of soldiers struggling in the bramble. The tough, prickly, and annoying plant, is trying to drain the men of their energy. This shows the reader the conditions of war; and like Brambles if they try escape they will got more tangled and intertwined with it to the point where it seems impossible to escape.   

Rhetorical question:
“What are we doing here?” The soldiers are wondering what they are still doing in this place. They don’t feel connected to the war they don’t feel like they are apart of it. “Is it that we are dying?” It could mean that they are losing hope and they feel like they are slowly dying.

Exposure Wilfred Owen

How is the idea of “exposure” – exposed to extreme weather conditions, is a recurring theme in the poem.

List all of the references to “exposure” that are included in the poem.

Explain what these references specifically tell you about the environment and conditions the men experience. How is the weather presented as an enemy?

 

References to the weather:

The title – “exposure”

“In the merciless iced east winds that knive us”

“Mad gusts tugging on the wire”

“We only know was lasts, rain soaks, and clouds sag stormy”

“Less deathly than the air that shudders black with snow”

“Pale flakes with fingering stealth come feeling for our faces”

Exposure – Wilfred Owen

Identify 5/6 examples of language techniques used in this poem. Explain why you think these examples (and techniques) were used.

What ideas, experiences, events and atmosphere do they convey?

  1.  Simile – “Watching, we hear the mad gusts tugging on the wire, Like twitching agonies of men among its brambles.

  2. Repetition – “But nothing happens”

  3. Personification – “In the merciless iced east winds that knive us”

  4. Metaphor – “All their eyes are ice”

  5. Metaphor – “Crusted dark-red jewels”

6.

Anthem for Doomed Youth

What has been included: What can you determine/understand about the writer of this text? What are his experiences beliefs and values? What does he want the reader to experience or understand?

What we can understand about the author is that he was a soldier, as the detail that has been included, but we can also assume that he is a poet as he has the literacy skills to put his experience into a poem. They’re many religious references in the poem, which leads us as the reader to think that he is religious.

What has been included: Consider the selection of words/vocabulary in this poem. Why have specific words been chosen? What do the words convey? How do the words affect our understanding of what is taking place?

In the poem Anthem for Doomed Youth, Wilfred Owen has included a wide range of Vocabulary and Words to emphasise certain parts of the poem. In the first line of the poem “What passing-bells for those who die as cattle?” I can feel Owens anger. The amount of soldiers who are dying in the war is being reiterated by the bells being tolled constantly. Owen feels like this is similar to cattle being sent to the slaughter house. This puts a vivid picture in the readers head of the comparisant between the two, but also the mourning families of the soldiers. This. creates a feeling of sadness and anger.

Many of the words that Owen has used in the text represent death and sadness. Passing bells, Drawing down of blinds, pall, pallor, candles, and bugles are examples of the vocabulary that Owen uses to set the scene in the poem.

What has been included: Consider the selection of language techniques in this poem. Why have specific language techniques been chosen? What do the techniques convey? How do the techniques affect our understanding of what is taking place?

Wilfred Owen has used countless language techniques throughout the poem for example: simile, personification, alliteration, repetition and many more. One that stood out to me was the use of personification in the line, “monstrous anger of the guns” Personification is when a human characteristic is given to a non human object. In this case, Owen has given the gun the feeling of anger; this may make the reader more able to understand what the is trying to convey. Others may interpret this line as meaning that the soldiers have the anger and it has been transferred  to the gun, but I believe in this case it is the other way. In a situiation where there is a major war, many lives would have been taken; and  in World War One gunfire was one of the main causes. So for many soldiers there friends lives would have been caught short because of guns, so when they pick up there gun anger might posses them because they know what the weapon will do. Almost like there holding a monster.

What has been included: Consider the contrasting vocabulary and images within the poem. How have positive and negative images been represented throughout the poem the language choice and images?

In the poem many of the words have religious backgrounds, as the reader we imagine peace and calmness. However, Owen contrasts this by using words that causes the readers images to swap from a biblical and religious place, to the middle of a war zone with guns firing everywhere. An example of this is in the first stanza where in one line Owen says “Only the stuttering rifles’ rapid rattle” then in the next he says “Can patter out their hasty orisons.”

Although there are many religious words and features which should create a positive image, there are none, The only image which sticks with the reader is is that of negative things. This is very ironic as war in England and Europe was glorified as an experience of a life time and something that you should be wanting to go to. Wilfred Owens own experiences must have been anything but enjoyable.

What is included: Dulce et Decorum Est

Images:

What Images are presented in the text?
In the poem Dulce et Decorum Est written by Wilfred Owen the images presented are powerful, but most importantly substantial and strong. The poem was written to show how the war was not glorious and noble, as many people thought it was. He wanted show how horrible war is, and its affects on people.

The line “bent double” immediately puts an image in my head that is not very pleasant. The image that is presented to me is of a soldier who has been plagued with sickness, but continues to battle; though during the fight it becomes overwhelming. He is forced into the position of “bent double”, and cannot continue.

In the second stanza of the poem, Owen has written the line “Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time”. The image that he his trying to establish is that of soldiers rushing through the trenches almost missing there helmets; but like in slow motion they reach back just in time to grab there valued protective gear before they leave the whole in the ground. As they reach the top of the trench they are still fitting there helmets, but with the rush of adrenaline they are finding it difficult.

“Behind the wagon that we flung him in”, is such a powerful line. I believe that Owen is trying to convey the image of an injured man in horrific mental and physical state who can’t continue. The state that he is in, is so bad that he can’t even walk and needs his comrades to lift him into a medical wagon. The image created by Owen is grim, but easily communicates his message that going to war is not nice.

The line in the poem that generates the most vivid image is, “white eyes writhing in his face”. The image that Owen has created is of a soldier in unimaginable pain; the pain is so bad that the colour has left eyes, and all that is left is the white squirming and twisting around. This line really hits Owens goal of trying to show that war is not glamorous and something to be proud of it. It is actually horrific and causes pain to many.

Language:
What specific vocabulary has been chosen to add the meaning of the text?

The use of Latin sets the time period, as Latin would’ve been taught widely throughout the schools

Language Techniques:
Oxymoron – “An ecstasy of fumbling”
The word ecstasy
Symbolism – “Smothering dreams”
Personification – “Haunting flares”

Ozymandis

I met a traveller from an antique land
Who said: Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. Near them on the sand,
Half sunk, a shatter’d visage lies, whose frown
And wrinkled lip and sneer of cold command
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamp’d on these lifeless things,
The hand that mock’d them and the heart that fed.
And on the pedestal these words appear:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!”
Nothing beside remains: round the decay
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare,
The lone and level sands stretch far away.

Quote Weaving

Use a quotation in a sentence to express your own  ideas

“For a moment the boys were a closed circuit of sympathy with Piggy outside”

“The thing is – fear can’t hurt you any more than a dream”
Fear can’t hurt you – The thing you fear can – People act on fear – It’s all in your head

The boys try to tell themselves “fear can’t hurt” them but….

As the boys start to come to the conclusion that they aren’t getting off the island anytime soon

 

Characters

Name: Ralph

Appearance: Fair Hair, Male, Young, Taller than Piggy, Past Childhood, Boxer’s Body

Language:

Origins: Democracy, Reason, Order

Relationships: With Piggy (intellect and reason) : Co-Operative relationship
With Jack (Evil) : Competitive/Rival

Name: Jack

Appearance: “Within the diamond haze of the beach, something dark was fumbling along.”- Foreshadowing  “Floating coat, tall, thin, bony, hair red beneath a black hat”

Language:

Origins: Evil, selfishness, Purist of power

Relationships:

Lord of The Flies: Setting

The book is set during an unknown Nuclear War on a deserted island in a remote region of the Pacific Ocean. During a wartime evacuation a British airplane crashes into a deserted island. The only survivors are young boys whose ages range approximately from 6 years old to 12 years old. Throughout the book the younger boys are referred to as littleuns and the older boys are referred to as biguns. The hierarchy among the boys reflects everyday social life as they younger kids look upto the bigger kids as role models and also for protection. As they are schoolkids, looks influence respect and power on the island. A prime example of this is when Piggy is made fun of because of his weight and glasses even though he is an extremely smart and wise boy.   

 

Practice Paragraph

Shakespeare in his tragedy Macbeth displays that loyalty is an important and relevant theme throughout the play; especially through the character of Banquo. From the start of the play Banquo shows loyalty, his first showing of loyalty is in battle with his fellow Thane, Macbeth and the King he is fighting for, Duncan. Later on in the play Banquo stays loyal to his former Thane and now King, Macbeth. Unlike other associates close to Macbeth, Banquo didn’t leave to support Malcolm; he stayed loyal to Macbeth. Banquo could’ve easily told people that he suspected that Macbeth betrayed the King and his sons, because of what he heard when they visited the witches, but he was a loyal friend and would’ve expected Macbeth to do the same. Banquo’s loyalty is tested in Act 3 Scene 1 when he shares his thoughts in a private soliloquy; “Thou hast it now, King, Cawdor, Glamis, all, as the weird women promised, and I fear, thou play’dst most foully for’t; yer it was said, it should not stand in thy posterity;but that myself should be the root and father of many kings. If there come truth from them, — as upon thee, Macbeth, their speeches shine, –why, by the verities on thee made, may they not be my oracles as well, and set me up in hope? But hush; no more.” From this, Banquo is suspecting Macbeth of betraying the King, but keeps quiet as him and Macbeth used to be warriors together and he trusts him. Indefinitely him staying loyal and Macbeth not being able to live happily knowing that the witches prophecy state that Banquo’s children will be King’s and not his, is what got him killed.